Wow! This is such a beautiful piece! It feels so melancholic and i can feel the emotions running through each word.

What a sad heart-touching poem. The wording was far from cliche and was actually very smooth.. I'm moved by this piece, Bob!

Behind the image in each line lies the weight
of a sadness, a longing...a touching write

Conscientiousness is an extremely odd choice of word, I really don’t see how it fits here. I adore the repetition of ‘throbbing’ though, you really craft words well. There’s always a story, and it’s poignancy is shown, not told. Fantastic ending too.