Comments : I miss you

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A melancholy piece. There is something about walking through the surf that brings such clarity of thought and which can make a person feel quite alone even on the sunniest of days. Sending you a warm hugs and much love. Milly x

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Michael

    Miss Dagmar,

    A lovely little piece of nostalgia you have written here. Gentle imagery that makes this a lovely read.
    Hugs to you, M :)x

    • 1 week ago

      by Dagmar Wilson

      Thank you Michael and I miss my friend. Hugs to you

  • 2 weeks ago

    by S.T.A.R.

    There is something soft about this that coexists with the sadness of missing a loved one...

    “this ribbon in my hair I am ready to set it free”
    ^
    I love this part, it feels like being ready to let go, but the absence of the person is still hanging to you..

  • 1 week ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    As the sea breeze plucked
    your ribbon from my fingers

    my lonely tears fell

  • 1 week ago

    by Tanya Southey

    Gorgeous x

  • 1 week ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Dagmar, this may well be my favourite from you.

    All the very best as ever.

    • 1 week ago

      by Dagmar Wilson

      Thank you Ben I have to agree. All the very best to you

  • 1 week ago

    by Oluwaseye Olayode Taiwo

    Great poem