Great poem. Keep up the good work.

Ashley
(ashleyandkaylin)

That is an excelent point Life is Poetry I wish I could answer that question in this small box. but I wish you would visit my web site to find the answer that I am still searching for.www.poetrymd.com You are correct i probably have more demons than you.

Hmmm throughout the poem it was rhyming with different rhythm, it was unique to read. I love the story you portrayed here since it's a life lesson, how appearances change from whom they really are and the maiden learned and seeked higher power and with that she was saved, I believe if the knight truly loved her he would find the power to get blessed just to be with the maiden, but if he was indecisive then he would've lost the maiden and all hope at redemption even if you're about to fall, it doesn't matter if you fell you can always get the blessing of God's grace if you let him in your life before you butcher it all up, that's the beauty of life.

Thanks for this beautiful story Michael I enjoyed reading this poem/story 5/5 as always

Lovely with a lesson to learn