Gone

by Brian King   Jul 17, 2004


You have gone so far away
i should have stopped you on that day

i could come to you if i was unsure
you ended the pain i had to endure

but now you have gone away
all my hope is in a state of decay

So now i guess you and me
wont ever be we

My hate right now is so monsterously great
curse who ever came up with this fate

now my soul is so depleted
i finally feel like i have been defeated

with you i thought i was in the zone
but now im stuck here all alone.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Great job on this poem. I like the rhyme scheme and it's has a good flow thoughtout the whole poem. Keep up the good work.
    --Sarah--

  • 19 years ago

    by Jackie Bilson

    I loved your poem. Makes me kind of sad...cuz I can relate :)

  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Awesome poem, Brian! very well done!

  • 19 years ago

    by julie

    very inpiring and i agree, i love the rhyming, it works very well

  • 19 years ago

    by SarZz

    Really cool!!!!!!!