Comments : Wanted Suicide

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah ala bella

    wow...that is so sad! but it is really good. all i can say i wow....

  • 19 years ago

    by jamie25

    this is so sad! but well written! nice work!

  • 19 years ago

    by Sammie

    shit sun......lol good job i mean

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah

    that's a really really good poem! i hope your ok! you've got talent. i hope you keep writing cause i like reading your poems they are really good! =) check out mine sometime if you want

  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle

    i like it. its good. i think that your good

  • 19 years ago

    by chip

    when i read this i got the chills...it was soo sad but it was good!! *5* goood job

  • 18 years ago

    by MissSideways

    hehe aww thanx guys :) i was pretty down when i wrote this poem. but im fine, lifes sweet!!
    xoxo dani

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    omg..that is so good!!..im a good advice giver(all my friends say)

    if u need someone to talk to email me Jmangel55@yahoo.com

  • 18 years ago

    by Cara

    It was excellent! I loved it! It was a fantastic poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by MissSideways

    thanx babe:) u rule, luv dani

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole Korwin

    Excelent, so emotive

  • 18 years ago

    by lilia

    wow that was really sad, i hope you dont really feel that way!! well anyways that was a great poem. please check my pomes out also. thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by Abby

    who are you talking about? if you don't want to aswer it's cool.

  • 18 years ago

    by Already Beautiful

    Very beautful but so sad.. really enjoyed it

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Todd

    That was a really good poem, i liked it alot, thats exactly how i felt a while back, everythang was goin wrong, we moved out, me and my mom were arguing a whole lot, i was in a relationship where i wasn't happy anymore and i had a guy that was my best friend that i had fallen in love with, but he didn't know it. i was at home all by myself and was goin through alot and decided to end it so i was gonna take all these mixed pills,i had taken like 4 and the phone rang, it was beside me and i noticed that it was Jimmys number (my best friend that i was in love with) and i decided to answer and he blurted out "ashley theres sumthin i gotta tell you, i've wanted to tell you for a long time, but didn't know how you felt, I love you" i was in shock and i instantly dropped the pills cause i realized someone cared, we've been together ever since and now we are engaged, i told him about what happened and how he saved my life and he was so glad that he told me that he loved me that night, so always remember that someone out there loves you no matter what! great poem, sorry bout my long story, just wanted to let you know. 5 all the way!

  • 18 years ago

    by emily

    I gave u a 5! This really hit a nerve! You have a way with words! keep up the good work! I have a poem about suicide too... check it out, if u get a chance!!

  • 18 years ago

    by `*~1-lUv~*`

    GReat poem! U have alot of talent. Keep the poems cummin.
    -HUGS N KISSES!

  • 18 years ago

    by jennifer

    I can relate alot to your poem its really good!!! your an awesome writer u have something good going here i wouldnt give up

  • 18 years ago

    by MissSideways

    Yeah darlin. That is fine :) I would be honoured!! I agree, im pretty sure something as depressing as that would raise heads. goodluck with ur presentation honey. all the best,
    dani xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    Very sad, but also very touching! if i did have tears left in me, i would be sitting in a puddle! lol
    luv em