Wings Over Water

by Dino Dhamphyr   Sep 26, 2026


I was the bird,
You were the fish,
I drowned in your world
Chasing a wish.

I couldn't breathe,
I couldn't stay,
So I spread my wings
And flew away.

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  • 1 week ago

    by Elsaeloise

    Your poem genuinely caught my attention. The emotion and imagery in your writing create a strong atmosphere, and I could easily imagine each verse becoming a distinct visual moment.

    As a professional commissioned artist, I’d love to develop custom continuation visuals throughout your poem, with each section receiving artwork that reflects its mood while keeping the entire piece visually connected.

    If you’d like to explore the concept, feel free to reach out on Discord: elsaeloise or Email: elsaauwuu@gmail.com.

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