I really don't think any words can describe what running threw my head right now. I thought poems was ingenius, i thought it was amazing. THe way you described the little solider, then how you reilzed your mother wanted an end....It was very great!!! I'm in aaww right now just remember pieces that stuck out. You have some talent behind your fingers I hope you get some more poems up because i can't wait to read them!!
Wow, another awesome poem by you! You're a great writer. Have you been published? If not you should, you make the characters in your poem come to life so elegantly and gracefully, you don't have to strain yourself to tell a story, because they just flow out of you! Great job again!!!