Comments : My little Soldier...

  • 13 years ago

    by julie

    excellent poem, really excellent! well done!

  • 13 years ago

    by Fran

    hey! tis moi! again vix, anuther masterpiece! god ur good woman! grrr sooo jealous yet so proud lol! so ye, get sum more posts up! i wana read talent lol cya huni luv ya xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Katie Silva

    Wow, that was really good. Its a really good and sad story with a lesson that tells us war is wring. GOOD JOB!

  • 13 years ago

    by Ten Feet Tall

    wow! that was so awesome! it really got me :'( but it was so worth the cry. you did an absolutly great job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Matthew

    Amazing poem, if I could give you more than 5, I would.

  • 13 years ago

    by Matthew

    Amazing poem, if I could give you more than 5, I would.

  • 13 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow...I can't even think of what to say about that...It was amazing. I especially liked the last line!! Great job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna #24

    This is a great poem!

  • 13 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    that was very true and touching... so sad... take care:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Mlkdipdcookie ©

    that was excellent work. your work has great imagination. great job.

  • 13 years ago

    by Bryce Ellner

    Wow, thats a really great poem, I thought it was very very well written. Lots of things running through my head. Good work, keep it up.

    --Bryce~

  • 13 years ago

    by Jacki

    I really don't think any words can describe what running threw my head right now. I thought poems was ingenius, i thought it was amazing. THe way you described the little solider, then how you reilzed your mother wanted an end....It was very great!!! I'm in aaww right now just remember pieces that stuck out. You have some talent behind your fingers I hope you get some more poems up because i can't wait to read them!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Lisa

    good poem, yet again well written like the other one. Reminds me of my little brother. good job, keep writing. :D

  • 13 years ago

    by Leah20

    Wow, another awesome poem by you! You're a great writer. Have you been published? If not you should, you make the characters in your poem come to life so elegantly and gracefully, you don't have to strain yourself to tell a story, because they just flow out of you! Great job again!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Mephastophilis

    WOW!!!!!! OMG Your so talented. this is so inventive and so sad and so deep and great. WOW. Pls read my poem, "isn' it time"- i think you'll like it and i's really like your opinion of it. xmollyxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Ami

    Exellent poem! I gave you a 5. Brought a tear to my eye...

  • 13 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Aww another great one Hun. Keep it up, and I loved it! =)

    ~Grace

  • 13 years ago

    by Samz

    really nice i gave it a five!

  • 13 years ago

    by insane authority

    wow u can truely capture the emotion! i felt like crying lol, ur really good at poetry :)
    n thanx for all the warm comments

  • 13 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    That's amazing. Really touching. Wonderful phrasing.