Comments : He was my everything

  • 19 years ago

    by viki

    This is amazing.. im going through the same thing.. and im sry i cant help cuz i dont noe wat to do either

  • 19 years ago

    by Carleigh

    I loved your poem. I can relate to it, becuz i'm kinda going through the same thing. Stay strong tho..XxX!

  • 19 years ago

    by alfie

    wow such a great poem, isnt it sad though that we have to go thru these things to b able to write gud stuff tho. but keep it up, it explained exactly how im feelin at the mo! thanx hun n i hope u feel beta soon, xXx

  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    I LOVED UR POEM ! ! It was Gr8 ! .. .. I read it aloud to my sister too, and she LOVED IT TOO .. It was so amzing .. I am so sorry for all that has happend, and I get wat you mean, Keep up ur gr8 poems .. ! check out some of my poems sometime too ... THANX ! !

  • 19 years ago

    by Marisa Lishay

    wow, i am agreeing with you on that, i am going through the same thing. thankfully, it brought me to tears, i needed that, thanks.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ally

    I know what that's like. I feel your pain and share your experience. Your poem has put words into what I have been through. I thought it could not be done. The love of my life left me. We were engaged at the time. He said he'd never want anyone else, That I was the only one to make him happy. He broke up with me not a month later saying he was engaged to someone else. -Sighs- But you have to be strong and go on. Don't go back to cutting. I almost died doing that. If ever you need someone to talk to, message me on yahoo... citychick5804.

  • 19 years ago

    by HunnyBun

    i dont kno what to say.. ur poem was great so great that i'm speechless buz of it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lisa

    What can I say, that was such a powerful poem....it was truely written from the heart and thats what makes it so good....im gonna keep my eye on your work from now on....its definetly worth the read...take care (Lisa Reed)

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    God I know how u feel , , , the exact same thing is happening and it just gets me so mad. I would love it if you read sum of my poems Keep up the great writing I love it so much

    Love, Taylor

  • 19 years ago

    by Nicole

    wow, what a great poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by medicine:)ma

    This poem is really hot "no doubt bout it" :) :) u can really take a breath away (my baby loved it too (ur poem got us back 2gether) thank you)

  • 19 years ago

    by tanya

    As you can see alot of other people are going throught the same thing, your not alone, and never will be, you have to be strong, and instead of turning to the knife, look whats right in front of you.... us we are here to help you. Don't take the easy way out. You are stronger than that.

  • 19 years ago

    by cRiSs

    >.Hey.i love your poem.thats the exact way i feel.dont worry.i know u probs saying its easy for her to say.she dont know wats going on.but i do.believe me i do.i know wat its like to love someone so much.nd not have them love you in return.wel just wanted to let u know.ur not the only one.well hit me back laters.0n my poems.<

  • 19 years ago

    by abby

    hey it is so sad but so good!

  • 19 years ago

    by craig

    `Any girl would be lucky,
    to have a guy like you,
    but no one will ever
    love you in the special way I do.`
    To me the whole reason and validity of this poem hangs on this stanza. a remarkable poem. When you fall in love again it will never be the same, but that is the nature of love, everytime we fall for someone it is uniquely different. top marks

  • 19 years ago

    by stephanie

    great poem i loved it

  • 19 years ago

    by Cassie

    wow every word in that poem descirbes me and my best friends relationship.. i used to cut then i stopped for him and now i moved away and have started again.. if you ever want to talk it wud mean a lot to me.. my email is slinkeypiinkey14@sbcglobal.net and my AIM is crayoncolordlips

  • 19 years ago

    by Cassie

    wow every word in that poem descirbes me and my best friends relationship.. i used to cut then i stopped for him and now i moved away and have started again.. if you ever want to talk it wud mean a lot to me.. my email is slinkeypiinkey14@sbcglobal.net and my AIM is crayoncolordlips

  • 19 years ago

    by blowakiss4u

    You are great writer and keeping searching for another everything.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ophelia

    wow!!! i know exactly what you're going through...ok maybe not exactly, but i've recently gone through the same thing. keep your head up...i know that it's hard, but with time you will slowly began to feel better. just remember: "never frown, someone might be falling in love with your smile." if you ever need to talk...i'm here to listen...rather than judge like most might.

    alwayz,
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