Comments : (Dedicated) This Ones For You

  • 13 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I don't think it needs any work at all. Very deep and powerful words. In a word...Brilliant!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    now that really kicks ass, totally relate, keep writing =)

  • 13 years ago

    by xInsignificantx

    this one is awesome too!

  • 13 years ago

    by cantchangeme

    Thank u all for commenting it means so much to me that such talewnted poets like yourselves wud consider my poems gud thnk u agen

  • 13 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    omg..this is magnificent! ohmy, lol, im out of words, you're poetry/writing is so beautiful, its powerful, i can picture the little stories and images, i love it all so much..dont stop writing, take care <333
    -xoxox-
    -Mortalidaga

  • 13 years ago

    by Daniel Ward

    wow, that was excellent

  • 13 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    that was very very good. beautiful flow and it really pulled me until the very end. keep it up. take care:)

  • 12 years ago

    by jenna bentley

    thats really good it means alot keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    oh wow! that wasbeautiful im sorry that ur friend is hurting, i know its hard to swallow..... hun koolwriting ur very talented
    stay strong

  • 12 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    keep writing*** is what i meant to say in my post lol

  • 8 years ago

    by Hrodwyn

    This is a good but very sad poem! it gives a lot scope in sadness! ~ Rowena (brit)

  • 6 years ago

    by ganjaru

    This is great of you ..