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by HOLLY ARMER
I don't think it needs any work at all. Very deep and powerful words. In a word...Brilliant!!
by Mild insomnia
now that really kicks ass, totally relate, keep writing =)
this one is awesome too!
Thank u all for commenting it means so much to me that such talewnted poets like yourselves wud consider my poems gud thnk u agen
by Not Bulletproof
omg..this is magnificent! ohmy, lol, im out of words, you're poetry/writing is so beautiful, its powerful, i can picture the little stories and images, i love it all so much..dont stop writing, take care <333
by Daniel Ward
wow, that was excellent
that was very very good. beautiful flow and it really pulled me until the very end. keep it up. take care:)
by jenna bentley
thats really good it means alot keep it up
by **Just Her**
oh wow! that wasbeautiful im sorry that ur friend is hurting, i know its hard to swallow..... hun koolwriting ur very talented
keep writing*** is what i meant to say in my post lol
This is a good but very sad poem! it gives a lot scope in sadness! ~ Rowena (brit)
This is great of you ..