My Eternal Breath

by Richard Bottary   Aug 2, 2004


Close your eyes love
See me in your sleep.
I'm your angel from above
Here to wipe those painful tears you weep.
Spread your shining wings
Our hearts beat with sympathy.
Relating to Heaven's Bells ring
We create a gentle symphony.
Both souls holding each other tight
Love infused by the warm soothing light.
An eternal kiss
Full of passion and no less.
Forever kept in eternal bliss
With your warm body I caress.
I view into your sunset eyes
Filled with purity that will never die.
You have given back to me all that had left.
Now exhale my angel
For you fill me with loves eternal breath.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Such a tender piece, I love it. Very romantic too. Good Job Babe

    --Sher

  • 19 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    salute =) dang who ever she is... she lucky :P:P:P its nice =) i liked everything about it... tucked with sweet words in it... def 5 =) i liked it...

    hope u pass by mine sometimes =) ciao ~LETISHIA~

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow...this was (once again) amazing! I had to make room for you on my favorites list!! Can't wait to read more!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Concealing Words

    That is a really good poem i really like it. very sweet and full of feelings, keep it up.

    thank you for the comment on my poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Richard Bottary

    Thanks Chris. From what I've read you have amazing wrtings as well. Sad part though...this really wasn't written to anyone inparticular. It mainly just came from the heart.