Comments : A Heart Of Paper

  • 13 years ago

    by xInsignificantx

    wow i really liked this poem! it was really good...please if you dont mind come and tell me what you think of some of my poems...thanks a lot and keep writing you are really good!

  • 13 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    gotta agree with lucifer awesome it as asolutely awesome

  • 13 years ago

    by Rebekah

    Well done 8-) Keep writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Daniel Ward

    wow, i aktually envisioned the whole thing. great writing

  • 13 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    I love this poem a lot....i really love it...

    ps: Could u plz ceck out my poem "The nightmare chamber" it would really mean a lot if u could check it out...thanx--taintedvirtues

  • 10 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Another well written poem from you.... i like this one.

    the rhyme scheme was great and it flowed nicely.

    good job.5/5