This is not a poem it is a song i wrote about my ex boyfriend i just want you to comment on it PLEASE it would me so much to me!
Baby when we first spoke it was on Microsoft messenger,
I met you through Emma and Ashley,
If it weren't for them I wouldn't have known you,
We started chatting and got to know each other,
We got on really well,
You showed me your picture,
I thought you were really fit,
You saw what I looked like,
and you liked what you saw,
then after about a month or so of chatting dirty,
I rang you to ask you to be my baby,
You said yes, I was so happy,
I was the luckiest girl alive,
We were together about two weeks,
But you said…
‘I'm really sorry but we are over,
we live to far away from each other,
and I said ‘I thought we were good together,
why did you have to go and ruin the only good thing in my life,
you broke my heart!'
The next day at school I couldn't concentrate,
Because I had you on my mind,
I really missed you and my friends could tell,
They were really supportive,
Especially one good friend called Lisa,
She helped me get over you,
She said ‘don't worry Sally, Steven is a twit,
He doesn't deserve you,
I hate him for what he has done to you!'
But the only thing that went through my head,
Was you and how am I going to cope without you,
Its times like this I need to be with you,
You were the best thing that happened to me,
Well so I thought
until last night when you said…
‘I'm really sorry but we are over,
we live to far away from each other,
and I said ‘I thought we were good together,
why did you have to go and ruin the only good thing in my life,
you broke my heart!'
I'm over you now,
But my heart will never be totally fixed,
Because you will always have the missing piece,
With you till I die,
all because you had to break my heart.
