Can You Imagine

by Ashleigh Skye   Aug 10, 2004


Can you imagine a world where people,
are afraid to speak their minds.
A world where people are beaten and raped,
behind the stillness of closed blinds.

Can you imagine a world where people,
are starving on the streets.
While other people take their fill,
and leave the rest to rot at their feet.

Can you imagine a world where killers,
walk among us everyday.
While innocent people are placed behind bars,
the key to the cell thrown away.

I can imagine,
about this world that I say.
For its the world we all live in,
the world of today.

A world where rules are bended,
and people fall between the cracks,
a world where nothing matters,
except the cold hard facts.

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PLZ vote and comment thanx

plz make a comment on this poem I'm not really sure if its any good.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Laura

    ASHLEIGH THIS IS A GREAT POEM. REALLY DEEP & SAD IMAGERY. WORDS OF TRUTH THAT ARE VERY THOUGHT PROVOKING...I HAVE OFTENTHOUGHT ABOUT WRITING APOEM LIKE THIS MYSELF. FLOW WAS UNDISTURBED AND RHYMES WERE ORIGINAL AND DID NOT SOUND FORCED!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    thanx you

  • 19 years ago

    by Kevin J

    Well, I think you did an awesome job. I like the topic and the way you put it together. I enjoyed reading it. Good job Hayley;)

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    thanx everybody im gald that you liked it.. and i guess that it wasnt that bad after all thanx for your comments :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    VERY VERY TRUE!!!!. I gave you a 5 because I couldn't have worded it better myself awesome job!