by Tyler Aug 11, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I looked into her eyes |
by Debra Ponsaa
Wow. Your imagery was awesome. I felt like I was there. |
"But in the inside I was getting mad." |
The story itself was very nice. The grammar however, was quite poor. |
by Lonely
Fair... |
Wow, the gift of telling a beautiful story in poetic form; Truly amazing! The emotions and feelings were powerful. I felt like it was a movie playing out in my mind. Wow! Thank you so much for sharing your gift. |