Sorry this poem is so lame. I always try to write about foster care, but this is as good as it gets, so bear with me please. The part where I have parents in quotations is talking about my old foster parents. Let me know what you guys think.

I loved this poem. I always start writing a poem specifically about something, and then when I'm finished, I realize it's changed courses, and fits into other things. It's just the way writing goes. Amazing job. Keep writing...

I thought that was great though I kinda thought the ending lost it somewhat...but I really loved it. It is so sad that people have to go through foster care, I have a friend that did and she told me all about it. I'm just sorry that you had to and still might be going through it for all I know.

good Job... I'm sorry yoru life was horrible for such a young age, hopefully it will make you much stronger as a person... :-\

Hey gurl you kno ive been there done that...it explains everything!! VERY GOOOD keep writing

that is a very good poem. i'm very sorry if it's true. keep up the great writting.

i thoguht it was really good, im sorry if its true, keep it up and thanks for commenting on mine xxxx

great poem and another one i can relate to... i was never moved from house to house but i was adopted. if u ever need to talk e-mail me or im me or sum thing cuz i know how ya feel. jello_baby13@hotmail.com
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another great poem, i loved it, ur an amazing writer w/ true talent, great job!!

hey gurl watz up. i love it. i am currently in the same boat. i go home in about 6 months. great job. 5/5

Wow I know how you feel but keep your head up