Comments : Saviour Self

  • 13 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    wow..this is incredible! you are a fantastic writer!! i swear..thats wonderful..you have such talent :) keep writing please, thanks for sharing your work with all of us :)
    -Mortalidaga
    <333
    -xoxox-

  • 13 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    Love the form you wrote it in. Love the poem. Love your work. Yes there is much to love... <33

  • 13 years ago

    by Baby B

    This is well written, rhymes, and has a great rythem. You are a great writer and keep up the good work. Nice job. Love it.

  • 13 years ago

    by Mephastophilis

    this is great- i really like the line about your savior being your disease- genius. also love the message about depending on yourself. god sucks, he's never been there. oh and thanks so much for your truly uplifting comment about my poem, just posted a new one along the same line though not quite as good. anywayz i should stop rambling on. great poem, u're truly talented. xmollyxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Daniel Ward

    very sad, i'm sorry you feel that way, although i have at times to. i hope things get better.

  • 13 years ago

    by Mephastophilis

    I know i've already commented on this poem before, but i just wanted to write a bit more because i don't think i really expressed what i think about it properly and i basically advertised my poem on it (soooo sorry) i love this poem, its really deep and i love the title and your clever play on words. its another poem that showcases your amazing talent and i love the first stanza. anyways take care. xmollyxx