Comments : The Distance Between...

  • 13 years ago

    by Kallie

    I love this Holly, its just the type of poem that makes me think 'i wish i'd written that!' I've been catching up on your other poems and they are pretty wonderful. Keep them coming.

  • 13 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    OMG i could totally relate to this! Amazing you described those feeling so well took the words out of my mouth whatta amazing poem im truly in awe keep up the great work xox

  • 13 years ago

    by Richard Bottary

    Quite extraordinary. Yet another writing that fills my heart. Very nicely done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    wow, holly, that was excellent! you had perfect rhyimg and it flowed so well! keep it up <333
    xxx take care xxxx
    -Mortalidaga

  • 13 years ago

    by Lydia O

    That really sets a mood of enchantment, Holly. It's delightful. And you have expressed it beautifully with a nice rythmic flow.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jacki

    so amazing!!!. It kept my attention threw out the whole poem, It flowed very well. I think you did a great job writing this.

  • 13 years ago

    by Amy

    Amazing poem. I dont usually enjoy reading love poems, but this one was truly beautiful, keep it up.

  • 13 years ago

    by Kayla Ann

    Wow, this is really touching. It was strange, I didn't think it would be good when I first glanced at it and thought it was over rated, but trust me...it wasnt. It was all great, but when I read the last line everything just fell into place...or something fell. Great poem:)
    ~Kayla

  • 13 years ago

    by Rebekah

    That was awesome, well done

  • 13 years ago

    by Bryan

    That was a great poem, and like so many others have said, you captured the feeling perfectly. Everything seemed to flow just right. I am very impressed. Keep up the good work.

  • 13 years ago

    by Kevin J

    Nice write :)

  • 13 years ago

    by stuart

    great poem! it kept me glued throughout! keep it up hunn :0)

  • 13 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure

    ** Sigh ** Long distance relationships... :-/

    Great Poem!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    WOW! very well written, I love the flow that you have! another masterpiece!

    --Sher

  • 13 years ago

    by Robert SEGURA AKA SPUNTZ

    this is a very beautiful poem

  • 13 years ago

    by anthony wright

    very good, tear, its really really reallyreally really really really really really good

  • 13 years ago

    by Victoria

    Lovely poem

  • 13 years ago

    by kylee

    wow! this is such a great poem, i like it! it is almost exactly what i feel for my boyfriend! come check out my poems and tell me what you think!

  • 13 years ago

    by Daniel Ward

    wow, this is really good. itz exaktly how i feel about sumone i know, but they no longer feel the same.

  • 13 years ago

    by Daniel Ward

    wow, this is really good. itz exaktly how i feel about sumone i know, but they no longer feel the same.