Wow, that was a super sad poem. But I thought it was great. I think you are an inspirational writer. That poem shows me a lot about your talent, and about your heart. Keep writing Danielle, I really like the way you put your words together. Great job.
awwwwww!!!! that is sooo sad!! :*( its so beautifully well written..but its very sad..i could feel the emmtion and i could picture the little things like the little boy writing and the mom upstairs crying and stuff like that :(* it was beauitful, keep writing <333
This was so amazing!!!! I mean i wish i could of thought of this! You have got some talent to write something as great as this! And i just thought it was amazing..It brung tears to my eyes cause im a very caring person and i feel bad you have to watch your mom like this..WEll i hope God/Santa heard this and brings happiness into your moms life! God Bless and keep your head high! GREAT JOB!
Oh...jesus that was good! It made me feel so sad, but in a good way though (as in a good poem, not as in a good situation..ehe)
What Im trying to say is, this is one of the best poems I've ever read!