Comments : Dear santa...

  • 13 years ago

    by Karrie

    Wow that poem was awesome! You really have some talent, I don't know where you come up with it lol. but keep writing I love reading your stuff, it's really moving.

  • 13 years ago

    by Bryan

    Wow, that was a super sad poem. But I thought it was great. I think you are an inspirational writer. That poem shows me a lot about your talent, and about your heart. Keep writing Danielle, I really like the way you put your words together. Great job.

  • 13 years ago

    by Emily Strickland

    That was a very sad yet beautiful poem. I really liked this one and it touched my heart. Great job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    awwwwww!!!! that is sooo sad!! :*( its so beautifully well written..but its very sad..i could feel the emmtion and i could picture the little things like the little boy writing and the mom upstairs crying and stuff like that :(* it was beauitful, keep writing <333
    -Mortalidaga
    xxxx
    take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Richard Bottary

    That was unbelievable. Definately the first of its class. You have a pure talent for poetry. Keep it up, I really liked this.

  • 13 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    WOW that was so well put. I loved it!! Yes you do have an amazing talent you really do.

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This was so amazing!!!! I mean i wish i could of thought of this! You have got some talent to write something as great as this! And i just thought it was amazing..It brung tears to my eyes cause im a very caring person and i feel bad you have to watch your mom like this..WEll i hope God/Santa heard this and brings happiness into your moms life! God Bless and keep your head high! GREAT JOB!

  • 13 years ago

    by loznal

    that was very good x excellent well done xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by mike

    exellent poem

  • 13 years ago

    by JS

    wow... that poem is a work of art. keep up the good work

  • 13 years ago

    by Krillin

    The best one of yours that I've read(in my humble opinion) so far. Definatly worth a 5.

  • 13 years ago

    by ~*Missing Them Already*~

    This is a truly amazing poem!!! I love'd it. It sent chills up and down my spine, and it brings tears to my eyes! Keep up the good work!

  • 13 years ago

    by jescelle

    i wish i could write poems like you do...............

  • 12 years ago

    by Bleed-Like-Me

    ive wrote a letter kind of similar to this one, but really yours is much better. xox

  • 12 years ago

    by _(fallen apart)_

    wow that poem is really sad but really well done- brought a tear to my eye, keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Elynnka

    Very emotional, hope it's not true...
    It was well written, I gave it a 5/5 ^_^
    Keep up the writing!

  • 10 years ago

    by ~Patiently Waiting~

    This is awesome, one of the best yet saddest poems I've come across of late. Where'd u get the inspiration? Good write, keep it up, 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by awww

    I love it... i felt it so much... it made me cry... one of the best ive ever read... keep it up

    ~angel~

  • 10 years ago

    by Lady C

    Oh...jesus that was good! It made me feel so sad, but in a good way though (as in a good poem, not as in a good situation..ehe)
    What Im trying to say is, this is one of the best poems I've ever read!
    Go you!

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.