The Sickness~

by Freakie_D   Aug 20, 2004


A gray sky,
A tint of rain,
I've got no feelings,
I'M no longer sane.

The Sickness inside
Is eating me alive
Cant control this anymore
Its like bees making a hive.

At first it was nothing
And than something changed
My moods are erratic
I may never be the same

I don't know what to do
I don't know who to tell
All that i know
Is that i am not well

I cannot see anything
all i can do is hear
All of those tears
My death is near

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  • 19 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    WOW! That is awsome! your stuff is REALLY GOOD!!! Better than mine! A little tip is don't push the rhymes- alive and hive, that was the only part that felt like u were pushing to find one. but all the same that is a GREAT job and you are Awsommer! lol
    luv ya and keep writing, you have awsome talent!!
    luv kt. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Stacy

    i really like that.. it sounds just like me, its really good to know that theres more people out there like me

  • 19 years ago

    by Freakie_D

    Thanks you guys it means alot that you guys like ths poem its one of my favorites

  • 19 years ago

    by _the_punk_kid_

    a beautiful peice, tragik but beautiful :)beanxx

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