a beautiful peice, tragik but beautiful :)beanxx

Thanks you guys it means alot that you guys like ths poem its one of my favorites

i really like that.. it sounds just like me, its really good to know that theres more people out there like me

WOW! That is awsome! your stuff is REALLY GOOD!!! Better than mine! A little tip is don't push the rhymes- alive and hive, that was the only part that felt like u were pushing to find one. but all the same that is a GREAT job and you are Awsommer! lol
luv ya and keep writing, you have awsome talent!!
luv kt. :)