I know how you feel. Right now my grandmother is in a nursing home with alztimers. She doesn't remember me anymore i'm just one of those strangers who stops by to see her once in awhile. We use to be so close still i fear the day when she will die. I know its coming soon but I try not think about it because when she does I will loose it. Anyways Great Poem, great way to express your feelings! And i'm sorry you lost your best friend, your grandma. Take Care ~Jacki~

Very emotional, you expressed yourself very well. Well done and sorry to hear about the loss of your Grandmother.

I'm very sorry to hear about your 'Grambo'. She seems like a lovely person. This poem may seem confusing to some people, but actually it is a form of poetry. Using characteristics from different things, such as a prison, to describe something else, a hospital room. Great job. My heart goes out to you and your family.

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wonderful poem. i am crying as i write this response. just wonderful keep up the good work.