I loved the story of adam and eve,.. and you just applied it, and showed the romantical point of view all wrapped up with nice words and shiny metaphores.
I envy this piece of work :)
Good, very good. I loved especially the first two stanza's. I have to say I am Agnostic and so don't find myself particularly drawn to poetry with a reference to a God of any sort in it, however I guess it fitted in with the poem. I see what you meant by not understanding the poem without background knowledge though. Also, I'd like very much to know why you changed the rhyme pattern in the last two stanzas?
Really awesome poem overall, will definately be reading some more!