Comments : Eve of My Life

  • 11 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Good write, but the flow was a little ify at times! Sort of here and there.........

    good job though very unique,
    ann

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Again, wow...you are an amazing writer.

  • 10 years ago

    by Roy

    Good work.
    I loved the story of adam and eve,.. and you just applied it, and showed the romantical point of view all wrapped up with nice words and shiny metaphores.
    I envy this piece of work :)
    Best wishes
    Roy

  • 10 years ago

    by Mousie

    Another great poem... beautiful job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    Thank you for commenting on my poem, I like this piece right here a lot. Mostly for the images, I can everything, and feel the emotion even if they are silent.

  • 10 years ago

    by naina

    Simply a masterpiece........

  • 10 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Wow. this has great flow and much passion! great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by LiveMyLifeOnALullaby

    Amazing poem. keep up the great work. very unique...

  • 9 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Oh! This is so very amazing.
    The flow was beautiful & the words were just flawless.

    I love the contradicting in this peice.

    You have lots of talent =)

    5

  • 9 years ago

    by Krysten

    Again a really great poem. alotho not really my kinda cookie. but the word choice was brilant and the flow amzing. a great poem ala in all a 5/5 again

  • 9 years ago

    by Sole

    Good, very good. I loved especially the first two stanza's. I have to say I am Agnostic and so don't find myself particularly drawn to poetry with a reference to a God of any sort in it, however I guess it fitted in with the poem. I see what you meant by not understanding the poem without background knowledge though. Also, I'd like very much to know why you changed the rhyme pattern in the last two stanzas?

    Really awesome poem overall, will definately be reading some more!

    Sole. x

  • 9 years ago

    by CourtneyyContageous

    I liked this one alot =]
    your someone who'd make my boyfriend wish he could say such sweet things.

  • 8 years ago

    by Hrodwyn

    Wow great poem!

  • 8 years ago

    by Loveless Dreamer

    Beautifully written. i love how each line rhymed perfectly. i loved it. 5/5 most definately. great job mike

    *Val

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    So now eve of ur life..... this is excellent..amazing..brilliant..like u capture me by ur title then u drown me with the deepness of ur word choice..

    5.5

  • 6 years ago

    by Boy

    GOOD POEM

  • 6 years ago

    by ryan cliff

    I really likes your poems.. hope you can give a tip

  • 6 years ago

    by Brix Ambray

    The poem is faithful....i love the flow and the sentimentality...thumbs up