This was a very good poem... good rhyming with your words and good flowing lines. keep up the good work.

thanx:) i also like my other poen which is called " description of life"

The poem is so smooth!
I like it.
Give it a 5!
keep it up!
;)

wow....I can't see at all why this poems rating is so low...it was terrefic. I loved it, it was so sad:( You do a great job with emotions and making people feel the pain in the poems you write...keep it up

wondeful i loved it, so much emotion i love itxxxxxxx

great work, Jacqui, but i am so sorry to read this; must have been very painful

Very well written poem, so many perfect words!!! Wow, it's amazing....Hope that you are ok?? I really like it!

Very well done! Very creative I like how you used the rock taking away the scars. Brilliant piece of work! ~Brooke~