Comments : The Angel With Scabbed Wings

  • 13 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Hmmm, that was a good poem. You can tell you're reading a good poem when you sorta get tingly while you're reading it. Yeah, I liked the idea, and the image of an angel with scabbed wings is one that never occured to me, but is terrifying to think about. Whenever you write "how's things" I think it should be "how're things" because whenever I use that expression, I say "how are things" since "things" is plural, but that isn't really important. Good work.

  • 13 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    wow, this is fabulous, amazing work! so creative and powerful, i could picture it, i love your work, keep writing :) excellent!
    -Mortalidaga
    xxxxtake carexxxx

  • 13 years ago

    by beaver

    excellent.

  • 13 years ago

    by juss an allycat

    Strong but no doubt beautiful. Thats all I have to say

    xxoo,
    alysse

  • 13 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Speechless - amazing thats all i can say your poem touched me so deeply i cant even begin to explain well worth a five id give you a ten if i could!
    Thanks for sharing Eirisa

  • 13 years ago

    by Daphne Darling

    Unlike some of the stuff I have seen this is well worth the time spent reading it, it is an amazing poem... But you probably know it already so yeah. Well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure

    Beautifully Written.

  • 13 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    That was a beautiful and touching poem. The unusual idea of an angel w/scabbed wings and the visual image i got from your poem was just amazing. I especially loved your rhyme scheme since it was not that of the usual ones you see all the time. Excellent job.

  • 13 years ago

    by nikki

    excellent
    xnikkix

  • 13 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow...thats really good. whoa...haha...no it really is awesome.

  • 13 years ago

    by JS

    wow...an amazing poem. the flow of it was great. keep up the great work!

  • 13 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    it's nice =) very original =) im fascinated with angels... i liked ur work.... hope u pass by mine sometimes =) ciao

  • 13 years ago

    by Ben

    omg, it was absolutly brilliant, i loved it, i was compelled to keep reading, you have a very good tallent, it was magical, thank you for sharing it with us all, im sure we are all honered to be able to read it, i know i am, nice work.
    Ben

  • 13 years ago

    by Daniel Ward

    wow, you are so talented. i love your poems. keep writing.

  • 12 years ago

    by I.Dont.Own.Emotion.I.RENT.

    i lu it! tell me wen u post another poem!

  • 10 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow..this is absolutely the best poem i've read all day...its great..i really enjoyed reading it.

    but i do have one suggestions....

    "Your wings are broke"

    ^^in this line try changing "broke" to broken... it would sound much better.

    nice work though.5/5