whoa, that's freaky. is that a true story or something?

well, the poem had something special in it- a free-verse but it has a... thing. i can't describe it but it's really good. wow, i am helpless with story-telling. anyways, take care:)

Ooooh...Eerie...

I liked how you described looking at the trees and how his arm was on the window...It gave the poem a very real feeling!!

you are so good at expressing yourself. very good indeed.

YES HERE IT IS THE SERIES I"VE BEEN WAITING FOR!!!!!!!!! :)....anyways i have to agree with holly my favorite part was when you were describing how you were looking out the window. I had awesome visuals while reading it. I love how you decribed everything made feel like i was driving the car. I couldnt' stop reading it and I didn't want it to end.....HURRY hurry i can't wait for part 2!!!!!!!! :)

eerie... excellent, goin to read the ohter one.

omg that was soooo sad!!!!!! i really enjoyed reading it!!!
~britty

Wow... that is creepy, good job. 5/5

Allanah Rayne