welcome back....nice poem

hmmmm... I thought I commented on this.... but I don't see it... that is very strange.... so I will repeat it...and if the other comment shows up sometime, I will look REALLY foolish!

I relly LOVED this poem! Other people already mentioned some of my favorites lines in it... I loved the whole stanza about idealism and loving changes made!

There are just a couple technicalities that will make this more amazing that it already is... The second stanza should start "A vision" not "An envision" and the first line of the 3rd stanza should end with "perception" not "perceptive"

Great Work, Trincy! Welcome Back!!!

Such a beautiful poem Trincy..I have been away for awhile but I iwll catch up with your amazing poems..you are on my faves list. please write more, Timothy r

Thanks Ann. I made the changes. Many times my comments have disappeared. But i figured out why it was happening. I used to press back button before it was properly submitted...lol!

Everybody has given me valuable comments. Thanks a lot. It is truly inspiring!

And Matt! You flattered me! Even after seeing the mistakes you gave me a 5???? That was unexpected! But Thanks.

Thank you everybody.

awe what a beautiful poem!

very well done exellent follow through on the poem it never left you hanging and was done well good job take care and keep up the good work

hey beautiful poem.....loved it. and thanks for that comment .....it was really sweet of u....god bless u!!! keep writing.

Wow..You have written what crosses people minds everywhere. I did have a relationship with someone over the internet and I have experienced what you have wrote. You did a great job on conveying everything. Thanks for sharing :)

Take Care, Jess xx

This was truly awesome. You did an incredible job of capturing and describing emotions and aspirations at the heart of a long distance relationship. You expressed it all with such beautiful language.