OMG i would have never thought of that. That is so amazing!!!!!! I just loved how you decribed the water spashing against his jeans and how he found the locket. It gave me great visuals! I loved this poem so much. AWESOME BRYCE JUST AWESOME

BTW did you read any of those ghost stories i posted for you? If so how did you like them?

WOw... Loved it. More like a story... a very good story... lol.. keep it up!

this is a really good poem, the whole series is very good. very flowing and story like. xmollyxx

everybody's lovin it and i am too! how do you do it? who ever said boys hate poetry, boys don't appreciate them, boys don't make poetry... they are so wrong. take care:)

Wow, VERY descriptive, i love it.

again, 5/5

-Allanah Rayne