you've got real talent anyone ever tell you that?

thanx stacey- i was worried that every1 hated it cos no 1's voting or commenting. U've made me feel much better. thanx a lot. xmollyxx

Wow, im really not joking here this is the best poem i have ever read on this site its you who deserves to be on the front page not me, thats is so good, it tells everything that im angry about but i could never put it into words like that wow thats amazing id have given this poem a 20 if i could, i will defnately have to read your other stuff.... just wow! iw ould recommend this poem to anyone.... :)

AMEN. That was excellent. You brought to light all the things that people should know.
You can win more money in the lottery than what the Bush admin. plans on spending on AIDS.
Brilliant. Cheers.

Thank you all for the nice comments :) xmollyxx p.s- yeah The Bush admin sucks. Some1 like Bush should never be allowed to have so much power.

hey very nicely done and after reading this poem...it made me think about the world. very nice!

That was excellent an i totally agree, our government are a bunch of w*n*e*s.
Julie

wow. that was very very very good. beautiful. you'll succeed in life, i say. awesome rhyming and content. you're really a great poet. take care:)

Thanks every1 for all the lovely comments. i appreciate them all. to shadowmaker- thanks for the comments, i understood most of it apart from the thing about mosquitoes but thanks a lot again- this was my first draft of the poem and i was tempted to change it and inprove it but i decieded to keep it this way because i wrote it from from my heart and i wrote the first things that came into my mind. I don't want it to be perfect, i like its imperfections, do you get what i mean? nothings perfect anyways, especially not this world. xmollyxx

Your eyes are open but you don't see

I really liked this one. you have an awesome talent girl. keep it up and take care!