Comments : Hope

  • 12 years ago

    by Cody

    Chills came over me when I read this, especially the end. very deep. You are very talanted and don't let anyone tell you different.

  • 12 years ago

    by Minkus

    Excellent poem-Thanks for the great comment on 'Poetry", it really helps to find what my poems make people feel. Your poem gave me a sense of loneliness and hopelessness, and once again, great descriptions.

  • 12 years ago

    by creasy

    wow!! really loved this poem!! it had soo much meaning!! i love it!! keep it up!! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    Wow.This is just simply a fantastic piece.The imagery, metaphor, you write with such maturity and feeling.The last stanza is great and the very last line has such an emotional impact.You capture the hope and sadness we all feel at some point so well.Excellent poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Beautiful

    Hey! This poem was absolutely amazing. I could relate to it all the way. I loved your word choice and the way the poem flowed. Fantastic Job!
    ~Evry1esbeautiful~

  • 11 years ago

    by jed

    This made me think about what a b**tard my own father is!!! powerful! 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    In my case, it was:
    "You never came back for me Mommy"

    But then......later.....I waas reincarnated, in the very same body (!), as my Real Self, and have been reconstituting, and healing properly, ever since I had that insight that I could!...