Comments : Stolen Sunbeams

  • 18 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    This is really good. I especially like the metaphor of the razor blades. Nice word choice.

    (and thanks for the review =)
    -Erica

  • 18 years ago

    by melinda

    Wow this poem is very very good! hunnie please dont think your a bad writter cause you aint! this is so goood, really. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Great poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LyricalFlow

    Really good, loved the words u used, they captured the atmosphere
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Wow... amazing poem! great imagery and graphical.. flowed very nicely and was very deep! loved it! and also great title for this poem it really stands out =)

    --emotionless19.*

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Wow, thats excellent,,,GREAT JOB!

  • 17 years ago

    by Genna

    Wow, that was really deep and meaninful. loved the "stolen sunbeams" and "razorblade" metaphor...an incredible peice of writing...top stuff!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Aww. that was deep. ocean deep. i loved it. the raw emotion was powerful. love it. 6/5 ~KM~