Thank you thank you i'm trying to brouden my writing. Just trying different styles and such. But i really like this poem alot for some reason. Maybe because if i didn't know the answer it would make me think who really did it?

Actully in the poem i have alot of clues that say who its. First it starts off with the piercings one shallow one deep, if dracula would have done it, they would have been the same. Also the haky that was found by the bed. So it was the father if you re read it you will see......:)

"In 1893 in a quite little Inn" did you actually mean quite, or did you mean quiet?

"Or was it the famous man
we call so we
regularly call Dracula "

I don't really understand that sentence...is there something wrong there or am I missing something. Yeh I think it is the dad, the shallow and deep bite thing just doesn't make sense.

the last line
"Or was it the famous man
we call so we
regularly call Dracula "

meaning
the famous man called dracula......