hey.
I like your poem, it's good written. It a pitty that you only have 1 poem now. Let me know when you have more work of you.
thx for the comment on my poem. Keep writting.
love...

Jamie,
Very, very good! I didn't know you could write like that! The person who commented before me is right. Put more up there!
Timothy

I love this part of your poem:

the windows are so dark,
yet there tunnels to my past,
my mind replays everyday
right up to the very last

Those sum up everypart of life. I'm upset you only have 1 poem up (so far) because you are very talented. Timothy left a msg on one of my poems and said to check yours out. I'm so glad I did!!!!!.

This poem was beautiful and sad. But amazing at the same time. You are very talented and I can't wait to read some more.