American Am I

by Robert   Sep 1, 2004


They say we are the wealthiest place to live and thrive,
but even where we live it is hard to survive.
Capitalism at its crest and peek,
will take everything and leave nothing for the meek.
We are the ones that will seek the highest profit and keep it for our own,
but in the world we live in I fear we are alone.
Others say we are blinded by greed and fat on our own waist,
but they judge us in haste.
I agree we want more for what we do,
but we are conditioned to be like this just like you.
We have our families that we want to succeed,
in this world of our in constant knowledge and greed.
We had experienced a loss at 911 that was to be our test,
but now you know we are as weak as the rest.
I think you need to realize the pain we constantly share,
and the fact is we really should care.
How can you feel for others when you know one way of life,
please tell me how to help others in their strife.
If we take the time to see past our own little place,
then maybe we could come face to face.
I am an American and I know this to be true,
and I cry and bleed just like you.
My blood spills and flows like all the rest,
and even we nurture our children from a mother’s breast.
I will listen to you if you hear me out,
for only if we work together in this world could human kind remain stout.

Written By
Robert Lee Niswander
Copyright 2004

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  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    O.k I sort of agree, but i sort of don't. I mean in a way we are weak, but it is because the actions of one, and not the actions of us as a whole. Anyways that aside, the poem was well written, the descrpitive words were well chosen, and the emtion was deep. The flow was great, and the message was real, and every word seemed to be heartfelt. Again Robert, as well as I don't whole heartdly argree with you, I have to give this poem 5/5 because it deserves nothing less.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    I can't say that I agree with this poem, but it's still good. ^^ 4/5
    ~Stef

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Not my type of poem, but it
    was very well penned. I do
    agree with you for most of this
    poem. Very well. God bless 5/5
    <3tay(^_^)

  • 16 years ago

    by skynerraw

    I really like the message it gives, I don't think we are really weak, but I still like the poems and it's message. It was a great poem, and amazingly written, nice work!
    Sky

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Nice example of humanity. good work. i like all the feelings and the way you expressed your poem. its your nice work. take care