Very inspiring work. Just as Chris said it was very original and lovely descriptions. Well done.

I think you are beautiful Jacki! ( well from the pictures you had on there before) excellent piece. And your right dont EVER come out of your ghostly writtings for they are most esqusite and brilliant, and excellent and inspire me and lighten up my whole day, by God you are an excellent writter Jacki :)
Julie
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Aww very good! I liked it a lot and I know many people can relate! Keep it up! =)

~Grace

That was an honest portrait Jacki...from your work, I can say, you ARE beautiful! Well done...Bravo!!

Sarah

wonderful poem, i really like it, and you are pretty :)
-Mortalidaga
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Lucifer, i didnt mean she should just write ghostly writtings, but she shouldnt stop wrtting them, as they are excellent but that doesnt mean other things besides it :)

this was a very good poem.. I believe that this is one of the best ones ever becuase it really expresses your feelings. thanx for showin us

Great poem Jacki, I loved it ..please keep up your fantasic work..Timothy r

Thank You everyone :)