Well done, i liked the way you wrote it and the concept, very good...

-5-
xx, PorteR

great poem! I love the content. Definitely a 5/5.

context* not content, sorry, lol.

Interesing. I must say, when I read the title I was thinking of a totally different sort of guest so this poem took me by surprise. Anyway, interesting poem. Maybe you shouldn't rhyme all your poems, because it does seem like some rhyming parts are really forced. But, keep writing, take care.
Satuxxa

not to bad:) i liked it..5/5

Shannon

"Setting up the stage for us all,
Only to be delighted when we fall.
Souls of many that have gone the wrong way,
Fall to his hunger as hellish prey."

^^Beautiful. Just beautiful. Such intense imagery and power behind those words.

"And that is what you really might be,
For with out God your soul will not be free.
He spat at me and then smiled in jest,
Thank you oh humble priest for being a gracious guest."

^^AMAZING ending. Oh how I loved that. So intense it hits the reader like a slap in the face, and it is certainly a twist.

I liked this. I thought it was beautifully written and it holds so much meaning behind the written words.