Nice write dude;)

Nice poem. Keep it up! Take care! =)

~Grace

Great Poem, Brian!
I especially liked these lines:
I don't ever know if I'll be fine
Where the hell is this cloud number nine

countless people have probably wondered that at some point in their life!

hey hun i read your info it says you are only 14 and yet your words mean so much, I myself am only 13 years old and I love to write, even if my writing isn't the greatest which I don't know..but age doesn't matter you feel what you feel and everyone has different opinions. In my opinion you are a great writer and you must have a lot of respect for girls. You rock, never change who you are.

xoxo love xoxo
abbie*