Hey Steve,
Great poem. Keep up the good work. I care about you more than words can tell. You mean the world to me. If I ever lost you.....I don't know what I'd do. I love you so so much, Steve.

Love,
Ashley

thats a grrrrrrrrreat poem keep up the good work ***** stars ;-)

arrr....such a lovely poem,great descibtion,use of word,I love the flow, its a really neat peice of work...love ur writing,I must read more :) !!!

Wow! very nice! it's so good to see some new stuff from you!

Just a couple things to fix:
Line 5 & 16 "your" should be "you're" and
Line 5 "apart" should be "a part"

this is so sweet keep it up