I'm hoping to make a big comeback here. Sorry I've been away for so long. I figured I needed to make an addition to Hell's Prayer. I hope you enjoy.

Beautiful & touching. Keep the fantastic work up!

Superb...your talent is amazing. Not many people could write two contrasting poems and both be awesome, but you my friend have done just that!! Beautifully done!!!

beautiful poem

I agree with Zy too _ ADORED THOSE LINES!!! Richard your starting to leav me speechless hey? Everytime i read your new posts i find myself lost for words because i feel that mine could be no comparison to the ones i have just read - your amazing thats all i can say hey? a truly inspiring and amazing poet im so glad i discovered your writing! Eirisa xoxo

I just wanted to apoligise for spelling your name wrong on that other comment! lol sorry!!

"Shall my wrongs do right...My lord I hold thy soul in sight".

This poem for me pushes against the unknown boundaries...It was captivating with visionary passion.

"Human beings are aspects of a single, unified nature, God is identical with nature".

I've read also all of your other poems, great work...Please read and comment on mine. Thanks

Kind regards

Wonderful poem. The flow of it was so magnificent and I loved the whole idea behind it. Keep up the great work and take care! =)

~Grace

excellent, excellent, excellent poem! the flow was amazing. i liked the words you chose. you grabbed me from beginning to end. excellent. thanks for the comment. take care:)

Thank you all for your comments and votes. I truly appreciate it.

awesome poem! i loved it! keep in touch!
lexi lou

awesoem great job. i like it. im not sure about the whole heaven and god stuff right now throught great poem.