One cut, two pills, three shots, four ..

by Unseen Exposure   Sep 11, 2004


One cut, two cut, three cut, four,
I shouldn't do this anymore,
Five cut, six cut, seven cut, eight,
But by now, it's already too late.

One pill, two pill, three pill, four,
My body trembles, falls to the floor,
Five pill, six pill, seven pill, eight,
This life, this world, I sincerely hate.

One shot, two shot, three shot, four,
Crimson red falls on the floor,
Five shot, six shot, seven shot, eight,
Death by choice, not by fate.

One tear, two tear, three tear, four,
Soon there won't be anymore,
Five tear, six tear, seven tear, eight,
This final decision, I contemplate.

One breath, two breath, three breath, four,
I've stopped breathing, breathe no more,
Five breath, six breath, seven breath .....

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  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    this is a really good poem, it descibes how we all feel when the worst gets to us. i love how you wrote it

  • 19 years ago

    by *K~L~C*

    wow!

  • 19 years ago

    by PAUL HEWSON

    a great idea , and supebly delivered

  • 19 years ago

    by mita

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  • 19 years ago

    by juss an allycat

    How creative!! oh wow thats sop clever i would never of thought of it!! Absolutely Perfect!