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  • 19 years ago

    by Chasityy

    wow...thats really good and so depressing...so in touch with reality...ur brilliant

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    Clever way to write this, I'm sincerely sorry for what you are going through.

    Megan §

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Oh wow! Awesome poem! great job tears. Amazing work <33
    -Mortalidaga
    xxxTake Carexxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Erin

    I really liked your poem it was very creative!! keep up the good work babe!!
    Erin**

  • 19 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    WOW!!! this poem is soo amazing, like all your poems of course!!! your such a terrific writer!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Wow really creative and very unique style you have here - great poem loved the rhythm you involved!

  • 19 years ago

    by BaybeBlew

    Very nice, awesome idea for such a poem. I enjoyed it. Great lessons are learned in the stangest of ways. Keep writing,
    Love,

    -Blue

  • 19 years ago

    by juss an allycat

    How creative!! oh wow thats sop clever i would never of thought of it!! Absolutely Perfect!

  • 19 years ago

    by mita

    thats was hotttt!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by PAUL HEWSON

    a great idea , and supebly delivered

  • 19 years ago

    by *K~L~C*

    wow!

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    this is a really good poem, it descibes how we all feel when the worst gets to us. i love how you wrote it