Good work. I was seriously wondering what your poem was going to be about with the title and category. But i understand now. From what i understood the horrible birds represented humans cutting down the tree as so destroying lots of innocent animals homes. Just if my interpretation is incorrect, i really don't know how birds can knock trees down. I thought it was a very nicely written and well thought out poem.
I did spot a typo when reading though. This line " Becasue they cause too much", you spelt "because" wrongly.
Great work, i enjoyed this poem.
Ohh right now that makes more sense. I've read the previous comments. I didn't know it was September 11 poem. But birds and trees make much more symbolic sense with this. So forget the thing i said before about animals n trees.
I think the message is nice and relevant to the world today. However, when you get to this line "This world is out of hand", all the lines following fall out of place. It's like you just suddenly lost the rhythm of the poem. It's still nice though, good work.