Great POEM...its free verse.and also its beautiful

ok its not free verse sorry

Im sorry that this happened to you and i hope you have a speedy recovery. nicely wrote, God Bless You...LiL One

love u babe that was so incrediaby touchin i was there with u, u know that right! i love u always will best friends for life!!!

Aww you poor thing! I'm so sorry for you, but it least you're still alive! I know it's gotta be hard writing about it, but keep it up girl cause I will love to read the other parts! Just like send me a personal message when you post them up here okay? Take care of yourself and keep writing! =)

~Grace

beautifully written...that's all i can say... :)