Wow. Great poem...makes me..."awe" in sadness...you have a very creative way of writing things. Keep up the good work. :) *Tori*

wow another awesome poem, if this is how your really feeling please dont give up, I wrote a poem for the people that are hurting..please read it, its called 'don't give up' lol...again awesome poem

great poem, but so sad :(.... keep up the writin!

lucy -x-x-x-

"Don't give me medicine
Cuz medicine can't heal a broken heart and dying soul"

Excellent couplet
Well done on this piece
5/5
*gem*