excellent poem, i can relate to that b/c me and my mom are lyke that too. i made a poem about it called Slash Of My Mother's Tongue if you want to read it.

I can relate to you on the poem jst like yesterday my mom told me how I was the wicked witch, a horrible person, hideous, and howinstead of having an aborion the 1st time she pregnant sh should have had it the 2nd time but you know we are better then them we can amount to something and be proud just remeber that you wont always be with her.

i can cant relate to your poem mom wise but dad wise i can that was a great poem....also dont question your life....shes ignorant to say that....

that was really sad.....hope you have better days ahead of you

This is really deep, but never let depression have the upper hand. If you do like the poem, it's showing you are weaker, and you are not the weaker one here, she is. Don't ever give in. All My Love

Megan §

Sometims i feel the same way with my mom,u just gotta take it slow and try not 2 let her get 2 u,

KEEP UR HEAD UP

I had a really shocking relationship when i was growing up and living under my mums roof too - so this poem sort of brought back alot of memories and emotions for me that i have managed to sweep under carpet until now - because i guess of the depth and strength of your poem (well done) Anyways know that it will get better, and if not then take the opportunity to take the only good thing she gave you - YOUR LIFE - and make something really amazing of it, without her and without her help ....thats what i did anyways! Best of luck to you girl your in my thoughts and prayers and email me if you need any support k
Luv Eirisa xoxo

I'm sorry about your moms and your
Relationship, but nothing is ever worth taking you life over,as long as you have love for her and believe your relationship will be better in the end the it will. My mom and I had an ok relationship But i still loved her very much she never told me anything like what was in your poem but we had our differences, but I'm sure your mom would have the hardest time if she lost you.
You don't know what you have until its gone.

Remember that. I'm sure your relationship will get better as the days go by.

wonderful poem, its really sad, i want to do the same to myself but my mom and i have a pretty good relationship, im so sorry you feel that way, you have a way with words that i can't describe, your poems are related to mine in a way. my username is 7MidniteTears, hope you have the time to read my poems too!

this is really good poem good job!!

Thanks to everyone who has taken the time to comment on my poem it really helps me out. Yah that day was a pretty bad day for me because of my mom and how my friends were acting they just ignored me even though i was hurting so bad. At times I think that have no luck in life and that is hould just end it. I know thats not the best attitude to have but yah after you go thru things all your hope is gone. I've been ok lately just focusing on school. I'm 16 so it's gonna be 2 more years until i'm out of this house that i hate sooo much but i trust that I will make it through those years. I've made alot of mistakes inmy life because of my situations. I still have the scars from all those days of cutting * at times i feel like doing it again* and God knows how many times I've overdosed on pills. All of this might be a cry for help and I know thata lot of other people feel the way I do now and I hope that you will make better decisions than me because even tho they took away the pain for a while i'm still stuck in the same place. I've just made the decision to join the National Guard in a few months when i'm eligiable which wilhelp me out alot to. Again thank you everyone who has voted and commented on this poem. Never do what it says in it tho because I was just writing how I felt. I see that I have to live for me and even though it hurts that your own mom doesn't love you God still does and I'm determined to prove everyone wrong and one day i'll show my mom what she did to me and walk out of her life and start my own. Always have hope because the only way you can feel happy is if your alive. Anytime anyone needs to talk just contact me. I'm in search of soem good friends since mine have like lost interest in me. Thanks again

i love this poem its super great dont worry about your mom tho....live your life not the one she wants you to live...

OMG that is so sad! my mom is like that at times too, but so are my dad and grandparents. anyway, you are a gr8 writer!

i just reread your poem and i started to cry. i hate how there are some moms you just cant please, and my mom is one of them.*sigh* but for you your mom is like that, for me, my whole family(except my aunt) treat me like that on a normal basis. but hang in there. dont give up, becaue someday you will be able to rise above that pain you have now, and if you kill your self, you will miss so many things that will make you happy. in the future.

This was a lovely poem. I'm sorry about your relationship with your mother. That really was a beautiful poem. If you would can you please read some of mine? Thanks!
~*~Jess~*~

Thanks again to everyone voting and commenting on this poem I love it lol. I wrote a sequel to it if you guys wanna go check it out feel free to and tell me what you think I dunno if it's any good but hey i tried

this poem was so touching!!!! i loved it so much. it almost brought me to tears. this is by far the best poem great !!!!

that brought tears to my eyes. thats very rare. that was a very good poem. plz dont do anything rash, if you need someone to talk to, just email me, k?

Hey guys here I am once again saying thank yyou to everyone who has read and commented and voted on this. I love reading the comments. Thanks again

luz ,i noe there can be times when ur close to taking out that knife because of something ur mom sayd but babez its not worth ur life...me and my mom definitly dunt see eye to eye and i wanna run away or sumthun....but jus keep strong and u'll make it...email me ANYTIME u need to tlk imma b there...hersinura@hotmail.com....xoxo