direct and to the point! I love it!
You dont seem to be disillusioned
or dissolved.

I loved this poem ... especially because I'm someone who is unsure of God as well. At times I need him so badly to be there, but I can't help but assume he's just not. I love the way you conveyed your thoughts in this poem. It truly is a beautiful masterpiece, and I can really relate to it in ways I can't even begin to describe. Always keep writing...

Gr8 job .. I really enjoyed this poem .. Ur a very good poet so keep it up .. ! Altho I do believe in GOD .. I loved ur work and how you had it worded I mean It kinda gives me a better Idea of your opinions on the subject but I too have written a poem for/about GOD .. but mine is asking for forgiveness quit differnt but hey we're two ppl wit two very differnt opinions and Im nto sayin mines right becuz obvioucly there are ppl who agree wit u I just wanted to put it out there I love all ur poetry and this one two but I do believe it him , and im not UNSURE about that .. but Anyways I loved ur poem .. it was gr8 so are all ur others .. ! keep it up .. !
Also check out my poems if u get a chance .. you might like them .. !
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nice poem
i lik it!
also, thx for visiting my poems, haha

OH WOW!!! this poem rocked!!!!! i loved it soo much!! you got talent!! love the way you used your words and put them together!! amazing!! VERY powerful!!!!

Another poignant poem. Awesome.

This is such a beautiful poem, Amazing writting, I can see u have lots of talent to share..Great work, two thumbs up! Keep on writting okay!
Shanney:o)