Very creative and well written... nice poem, 5/5.

Jailers are rapists...or so ive heard.. anyway, nice poem, amazing discription.

Your a very good writter
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This poem was excellent!
5/5

Well written...Liked the way.....

Beautiful. you have a true talent =]

xo,
Beth

5/5 this is amazing. its very descriptive and paints a good picture for the reader =] keep it up - alison

VERY INTERESTING POEM

I live in that prison too

Wondeful poem!
luvd it

I <3 it and I know exactly what its talking about!

It was good.. Your a great writter keep it up ;)

~!*FallenTears~!*

Mighty sexy...I liked it a lot...5/5

You have a lot of talet...EXCELLENT poam

Awsome poem!! creative and wonderful!!! love it!!! 5/5

AMAZING--I absolutely love it! =)

Absolutey incredible,
i had such troubles trying to put how i was feeling and yet u did it.
VERY WELL DONE
5/5!!

This poem is so good it left me absolutely speechless....or wait....i guess typeless in this case. lol. ahhhsum.

I love it. I really like how you can use a character in third person.