NO WINDOW

by Kevin   Sep 27, 2004


It’s all in the eyes my love
she said
a clear cut view
a wise old soul
what secrets do those big eyes hold?

I frowned
turned my smile upside down
No secrets just questions
never ending queries

There are no answers here
my love
a lick of pain
a slap of guilt
my eyes are eyes
look as you please
take what you will

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kris Lynn

    Good poem, Kevin, I really enjoyed it. Hope to talk to you soon.
    ~*~Christina~*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Brad Champagne

    Although I'm a big fan of punctuation, I also enjoy the ability to interpret a piece personally. The free flow was quite impressive, for I usually stick to simple rhymes and metaphores. Keep up the good work.

    Brad

  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle

    great poem... by the way... goin to read more.. i like how you word things... so much different then me :-D

  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle

    Um... For my poem Here I Am... It was pretty much just an emotional stream.. I just really needed to get my feelings down on paper or else I would've exploded... Thanks though... for your comment.. I apprecaite it... Peace*

  • 19 years ago

    by HJ

    hey

    Great poem, great wording and great flow...GREAT!!!

    I really like your style!

    Please check out my new poem, oh and their is a response awaiting you, on "Wanna Know What I can do"

    Kind regards
    Hayley