This poem is about someone who thought i was a beautiful wonderful person just because i have pretty eyes, and they assumed all kinds of things about me....

The eyes can be deceiving..I know it's cliche but it's true:p. People read alot into physical appearances, and not just of other ppl, but take this poem for example... you took a bunch of simple words and gave them lots of meaning, but that meaning is lost if you dont look deeper. Most of the ppl on this site that read this write are going to brush it off, because they are only looking for rhyme, form, structure, ect...in just a glance it will be wrongly judged...guaranteed!!
Probably just like your eyes were:p

The title is fitting

btw..thanx 4 Ur comment
btw2...nice name:p

Kevin J

That was beautiful! I like your style, so keep writing. I also thank you for the comment you left me.

hey

Great poem, great wording and great flow...GREAT!!!

I really like your style!

Please check out my new poem, oh and their is a response awaiting you, on "Wanna Know What I can do"

Kind regards
Hayley

Um... For my poem Here I Am... It was pretty much just an emotional stream.. I just really needed to get my feelings down on paper or else I would've exploded... Thanks though... for your comment.. I apprecaite it... Peace*

great poem... by the way... goin to read more.. i like how you word things... so much different then me :-D

Although I'm a big fan of punctuation, I also enjoy the ability to interpret a piece personally. The free flow was quite impressive, for I usually stick to simple rhymes and metaphores. Keep up the good work.

Brad

Good poem, Kevin, I really enjoyed it. Hope to talk to you soon.
~*~Christina~*~