Letting Go

by David Munoz   Sep 28, 2004


As I lay on my bed
And Remember your face
Sorrow fills my mind
As another takes its place

As I remember the times
That you were all I could see
My mind drifts back
To the times you fought with me

As I remember the day
That you promised me forever
I remember the moment
When you told me never

As I remember the feeling
When you said "Goodbye"
I remember the one
Who was there when I cried

As I remember the pain
When you turned away
I remember the angel
Who's been there till this day

As I remember the hope
That she gave to me
It made me realize that
She is more than you could be

As I remember the happiness
That she so freely gives
It made me understand
Why its so great to live

As my memories play
There is something you should know
I treasure the time I spent with you
But I'm finally letting go

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    I'm sorry this will be your last one for a while. Good poem, by the way. Very good. Keep up the good work.

    Ashley

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristin

    This was a fabulous poem!! EVerything rhymed perfectly! BRAVO!

  • 19 years ago

    by beaver

    brilliant work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amy

    This was a terrific poem!!! I loved it very much!! Awww, I'm sad to hear this will be one of your last poems for a while. I love your poems. Anyway, I can't WAIT until you post again!!! So, please hurry. lol. Anyway, terrific job with this poem and I'll miss your poems very much!!!!!
    Love,

    Amy

  • 19 years ago

    by Kris Lynn

    Very good...i liked it alot.
    ~*~Christina~*~

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