Awesome work .. ! I loved it .. keep it up .. ur a gr8 poet .. Lol .. And i couldnt help but notice ur from VA .. Lol .. ME TO .. ! ! Haha .. ! thats cool ..
Check out my poems too Id love to know what ya think .. !

What can I say, Absolutely one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. God blessed you with a gift of writing. I enjoy everything you do. Continue the good work. lol

this was an incredible work of art keep it up hun best wishes!
Luv always
MiCheLLe

good poem
i can closely identify with the 1st half, not so much the 2nd half,
but it was awesome anywayz

That...was completely terrible. Write something that doesn't feel like having a brick smashed repeatedly into your head to read.

This was a great peom, i loved the ending, makes you want to read more! take care, kayleigh xx

Hey don't give up hope, there will always be a brighter day, i am depressed alomst every single day but i keep saying in my head there will be a brighter day, none of us just haven't seen one yet, your poem was excellent by the way, you put together your words so remarkably, anyways if you need a friend to talk to just email me sometime

This is definately courageous and piercingly wonderful. I love the faith, truth, and child-like submission. Great xpression, nice poem.

Excellent poem, espically the way you expressed it all out in words. Keep it up!

Excellent poem! I loved it! Keep it up and take care!

~Grace

You could have such a great testimony someday! Just keep up whatever faith you may have honey, and with that faith, will come a glorious day that you discover. You're poem was absolutely incredible, it got me a little teary-eyed, but only because you are looking in the right direction for help, it was a happy cry for you dear. I was wondering if I could send that to a friend of mine, she would love it! Good job sweetheart!

Wow....

that's really good

wow, its one of the greatest poems i've ever read. i could reallie relate, especially at this time!! keep it up!!

I love a good, dark sad poam!!

that was a great poem got me close 2 cryin lol. all i can say is wow thta touched me.

whats this all bout -Alasdair at 2004-10-06
That...was completely terrible. Write something that doesn't feel like having a brick smashed repeatedly into your head to read.

alasdair i thought this poem was excellent so does the rest
keep it up hun we r loving it
xxxx

i love it! keep writing

wow, that poem or masterpiece really comes alive and you really did an awesome job and i really loved it. if you were talking about yourself Unseen exposure well then im really feelin u. i knoe how u feel and all the advice i tell myself every day is hang in there and think positive and good things will happen to good people. trust me well ttyl keep up the good work peace.

wow, that poem or masterpiece really comes alive and you really did an awesome job and i really loved it. if you were talking about yourself Unseen exposure well then im really feelin u. i knoe how u feel and all the advice i tell myself every day is hang in there and think positive and good things will happen to good people. trust me well ttyl keep up the good work peace.

Wow that is really good...I really luv it..theres a lot of feeling in it! Great job